Post by jakemoonrox on Mar 2, 2005 13:16:40 GMT -5
By the way here is some handy information to help you understand my story;
*Chrissie and jake have been dating for 6 months now and it is a public thing and Jake's crazy about her.
*Chrissie has framed Sam for Den's murder and Sam has been sent down for 30years
*Danny has now got a decent job as manager of the video store(Billy's gone).
*..........-That means missing info I cant give you.
*MW-Mystery women
Part 1
Jake:Alfie have you been borrowing my shaving cream again. Its empty!
Alfie:Nope maybe Danny used it he said he had a big date last night.
Jake:Yeah he probably did, you think he could afford his own now he is making money. Where is he anyway?
Alfie:Stayed out all night didnt he, must have got lucky!
Jake walks in
Jake:No offence but exactly who would want to sleep with Danny. I mean he talks in his sleep.
Alfie Really what about?
Jake:Eggs.
Alfie:He is an odd fellow.
Jake:Well I'm going out.
Alfie:Since it's 7am Jake you are either going to go to work, which is unlikely, or you are going to visit your posh bit across the street and bearing in mind you have a bunch of roses behind you back, I would say they are not for Johnny Allen.
Jake: She isn't my posh bit. See you later Alfie.
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Danny stares at the women next to him. He cant believe he got her. He should feel bad I mean it is his...... But he needs some way of relaxing. And anyway it does take 2 to Tango. The women next to him starts to stir, then wakes up.
Danny:Hey darling
MW: Hey sexy. Last night was great. You are so much better than.......
Danny:Thanks. It's a knack.
MW:Must be. Last night was great. The meal and afterwards. I mean......... is just a bit to passionate. I like a guy that just goes for it.
Danny: I aim to please. Anyway I was wondering if you wanted to go to dinner...................................Hears footsteps coming up the stairs
Danny: Who else has a key except you?
MW:I'm not sure.
Rosie:Chrissie? If your up there I need some cleaner the bottle's empty. Sorry I am starting early but Keith has an interview later and I want to go with him.
MW=Chrissie: Oh dont worry its just Rosie. I'll go sort her. To Rosie Just coming Rosie.
Danny:You look great from behind.
Chrissie:Cheeky. Chrissie leaves the bedroom. Hear her mumbling to Rosie. Danny stretches out in the bed. Chrissie returns a minute later.
Chrissie:Now she's back downstairs maybe we can enjoy ourselves. Chrissie crawls back into bed and starts kissing Danny.
Footsteps on stairs once again.
Danny:That must be Rosie agian!
Chrissie: I cant be bothered to get back out of bed. To rosie Rosie I'm kinda busy just look for whatever you need in the kitchen.
Jake: Its not Rosie. I have a present for you.
Chrissie:To Danny Oh My God. Its Jake. Quick hide in the wardrobe. Danny dives into the wardrobe
Jake walks in
Jake:Hey Darling.
Chrissie: What are you doing here?
Jake:Well I wanted to surprise you. Hands her the roses
Chrissie: Thanks.
Jake:Your a bit red. What have you been doing?
Chrissie: Nothing. She tries to push Danny's trousers under the bed, but Jake notices.
Jake:What are Danny's trousers doing under your bed?
Chrissie:What? Oh there not Danny's, there Dens, I found them yesterday. I just miss him so much.
Jake falls for it, but suddenly there is a sneeze from the wardrobe. Jake opens it and finds Danny naked.
Chrissie and Danny talk at the same time.
Chrissie:Jake I can explain, it was just a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. Look I really care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Danny:Bruv look I can explain. It was a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. You my bruv I care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Jake walks out without a word. Tears start to from in his eyes
Danny:Danny leans out of the windowJake please talk to me. JAKE!
Jake keeps on walking till he reaches the bench. Then he breaks down in tears.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
plz tell me what you think
*Chrissie and jake have been dating for 6 months now and it is a public thing and Jake's crazy about her.
*Chrissie has framed Sam for Den's murder and Sam has been sent down for 30years
*Danny has now got a decent job as manager of the video store(Billy's gone).
*..........-That means missing info I cant give you.
*MW-Mystery women
Part 1
Jake:Alfie have you been borrowing my shaving cream again. Its empty!
Alfie:Nope maybe Danny used it he said he had a big date last night.
Jake:Yeah he probably did, you think he could afford his own now he is making money. Where is he anyway?
Alfie:Stayed out all night didnt he, must have got lucky!
Jake walks in
Jake:No offence but exactly who would want to sleep with Danny. I mean he talks in his sleep.
Alfie Really what about?
Jake:Eggs.
Alfie:He is an odd fellow.
Jake:Well I'm going out.
Alfie:Since it's 7am Jake you are either going to go to work, which is unlikely, or you are going to visit your posh bit across the street and bearing in mind you have a bunch of roses behind you back, I would say they are not for Johnny Allen.
Jake: She isn't my posh bit. See you later Alfie.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Danny stares at the women next to him. He cant believe he got her. He should feel bad I mean it is his...... But he needs some way of relaxing. And anyway it does take 2 to Tango. The women next to him starts to stir, then wakes up.
Danny:Hey darling
MW: Hey sexy. Last night was great. You are so much better than.......
Danny:Thanks. It's a knack.
MW:Must be. Last night was great. The meal and afterwards. I mean......... is just a bit to passionate. I like a guy that just goes for it.
Danny: I aim to please. Anyway I was wondering if you wanted to go to dinner...................................Hears footsteps coming up the stairs
Danny: Who else has a key except you?
MW:I'm not sure.
Rosie:Chrissie? If your up there I need some cleaner the bottle's empty. Sorry I am starting early but Keith has an interview later and I want to go with him.
MW=Chrissie: Oh dont worry its just Rosie. I'll go sort her. To Rosie Just coming Rosie.
Danny:You look great from behind.
Chrissie:Cheeky. Chrissie leaves the bedroom. Hear her mumbling to Rosie. Danny stretches out in the bed. Chrissie returns a minute later.
Chrissie:Now she's back downstairs maybe we can enjoy ourselves. Chrissie crawls back into bed and starts kissing Danny.
Footsteps on stairs once again.
Danny:That must be Rosie agian!
Chrissie: I cant be bothered to get back out of bed. To rosie Rosie I'm kinda busy just look for whatever you need in the kitchen.
Jake: Its not Rosie. I have a present for you.
Chrissie:To Danny Oh My God. Its Jake. Quick hide in the wardrobe. Danny dives into the wardrobe
Jake walks in
Jake:Hey Darling.
Chrissie: What are you doing here?
Jake:Well I wanted to surprise you. Hands her the roses
Chrissie: Thanks.
Jake:Your a bit red. What have you been doing?
Chrissie: Nothing. She tries to push Danny's trousers under the bed, but Jake notices.
Jake:What are Danny's trousers doing under your bed?
Chrissie:What? Oh there not Danny's, there Dens, I found them yesterday. I just miss him so much.
Jake falls for it, but suddenly there is a sneeze from the wardrobe. Jake opens it and finds Danny naked.
Chrissie and Danny talk at the same time.
Chrissie:Jake I can explain, it was just a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. Look I really care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Danny:Bruv look I can explain. It was a one night stand. It wasnt meant to happen. You my bruv I care about you, it was nothing. Jake?
Jake walks out without a word. Tears start to from in his eyes
Danny:Danny leans out of the windowJake please talk to me. JAKE!
Jake keeps on walking till he reaches the bench. Then he breaks down in tears.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
plz tell me what you think
