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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 9:41:31 GMT -5
This is my script about Dot and Keith. Please tell me what you think Dot was sat in the Vic on her own. She had been working in the launderette all morning and had decided that she needed something to drink. After she had ordered her drink from the bar, she went and sat down at a table. She sat there sipping her drink while reading her ‘beloved bible’ People were coming in and out of the Vic, but Dot didn’t notice, she had here nose stuck into her ‘book’<br> *********************************** Keith was sitting at the bar, drinking his 10th pint of the day. He had been in the Vic since it had opened at 9:30. He had his head stuck into the paper, the words not really sinking into his head, he was too drunk. He wasn’t a brilliant reader in the first place but he was drunk, so it was even harder to make the words really sink into his head. Keith (holding up his glass): Another one please, Alfie! Alfie: Don’t you think you’ve had enough? Keith: It’s only…ermmmmm…what time is it Alfie? Alfie: 2 ‘o’ clock. Keith: Yeah! I knew that! Alfie: So, are you going home? Keith: No way! Another one won’t hurt anyone!! An hour later Keith was still by the bar, still drinking…<br> Keith: Another one please, Alfie!!! Alfie: No, no more. Keith: Just one more!! Alfie: You said that an hour ago!!! *********************************** Dot was only on her second drink and she had been there two hours. She could feel eyes watching her, she looked up, no one was staring at her. Dot (to herself): I’m getting too old.
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 11:41:35 GMT -5
LOL, aw I love Keith! More soon! ;D
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 12:02:52 GMT -5
Part 2
Dot was still in the Vic at 4 'o'clock, she was on her 4th drink of the day and she had finished reading what she wanted to read out of the bible and was sipping her drink.
Keith was still by the bar; he was on his 20th pint of the day and was still drinking.
Alfie: I think it's time you go home, Keith.
Keith: Why? Is anyone waiting for me there?
Alfie: No, you're starting to scare my punters! You do when you're not drunk, but you're even scarier now you are drunk.
Keith: ok, ok. Keep ya wig on!!!
Keith got up and walked to the door, on the way he spotted Dot, sitting at her table.
Keith's POV: God!!! How beautiful is she?!?!?!?
Keith just stood there and stared at the 'beautiful' women in front of him.
Dot: Can I help you?
Keith: I.errrrr.ummm. Can I sit down?
Dot: If you want.
Keith: What's a pretty young women like you doing round here?
Dot: Ooh, I say!!! Me?
Keith: yes, you.
Alfie spotted Keith chatting Dot up and sighed.
Alfie: Is this man bothering you Dot?
Dot: No. He's quite a gentleman actually.
Alfie: This, 'gentleman' has to go home now.
Keith: I'm staying here.
Alfie sighed and walked away.
Keith: I'm Keith, by the way.
Dot: I'm Dorothy, but you can call me Dot.
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 12:52:58 GMT -5
Lol, tis brill!!
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 12:56:43 GMT -5
Thanks for replying Sarah. It means a lot. ;D
Part 3
It was now 5 ‘o’clock and Dot and Keith were still sat at the same table, drinking the same drinks and talking the same cr*p.
Dot: ooh, I say!!! Look at the time! I’ve got to go home!
Keith: Stay for one more drink!
Dot: I can’t, I’ve got to go to work tomorrow morning and I need my sleep!
Keith: Where do you work?
Dot: The Launderette, next to the Minute Mart.
Keith: Ah, I see.
Dot: Yeah, and I see the clock and it says it’s time for me to go home.
Keith: Funny and beautiful! You’ve got it all!
Dot: Thank you! Well, will I see you tomorrow?
Keith: Depends.
Dot: You’re a man of mysteries, Keith, a man of mysteries.
Dot put her coat on and walked out of the Vic. Keith went and sat by the bar again…<br> Alfie: At least some people know when to go home!
Keith: I’m going mate! Got to go and have a bath for tomorrow.
Alfie: Ohmygod!!! <Pretends to faint> you having a bath?!?!?!?
Keith: Ha, ha. Very funny!
Keith gets up, puts his coat on and walks to the door.
Keith: See ya tomorrow, Alfie!
Alfie: Bye, mate!
Keith walked out of the Vic and walked across the square to his home at No.27.
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 13:01:03 GMT -5
Fabby By the way if you use more than 2 question marks in a row you're gonna get them angles popping up everywhere!
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 13:04:35 GMT -5
i kind of figured that one out lol. They're cute though so it doesn't matter!!! Do you want any more? Love Katie x
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 13:08:03 GMT -5
i kind of figured that one out lol. They're cute though so it doesn't matter!!! Do you want any more? Love Katie x Yeah please ;D
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 13:10:42 GMT -5
Part 4
The next day, Dot was up early; she was up at 6:30 and now working in the launderette, fiddling with people’s pants.
Keith was up early too; he was up at 12:30, (early for him anyway) and was getting ready to ‘surprise’ Dot in the launderette.
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Keith was finally making his way over to the launderette at 2:00. He had spent an hour and a half changing his clothes and had ended up wearing the first one he had put on.
Over at the launderette…<br> Pauline: What did you do last night?
Dot: I met the most amazing man!
Pauline: What’s his name?
Dot: Keith.
Pauline: When do I get to meet him?
Keith walks into the launderette.
Dot: Now! Hiya Keith.
Pauline turned round and stared at the ‘man’ in front of her.
Pauline: This is Keith?
Dot: Yes, Keith this is Pauline, Pauline this is Keith.
Keith shook Pauline’s hand. Pauline stood there staring at the ‘mess’ in front of her…<br> Keith: Pleasure to meet you.
Pauline: Can’t say I can say the same.
There was a minute silence in the launderette; no one knew what to say…<br> Keith: I’ve got to go now. Will I see you in the Vic later, Dot?
Dot: Yeah, about 6?
Keith: Sounds great!
Keith walked out of the launderette and out into the square.
Pauline: What a mess!!!
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 13:13:50 GMT -5
fiddling with people’s pants. Haha! More soon xxx
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 13:16:23 GMT -5
Part 5
It was 4:30 and Dot had just finished the Moon’s washing. She was putting a pair of Alfie’s pants into his bag…<br> Dot: Ooh, I say!!! Pauline, I have to go home!
Pauline: Why?
Dot: I have to get ready! I’m meeting Keith over at the Vic, remember?
Pauline: That’s ages away!
Dot: Yeah, but I have to get ready!
Pauline: I bet he’s not gonna make an effort!
Dot: I am though!
Pauline: Go then! I’ll have to shut early. I’ve got to pick Peter and Lucy up from school.
Usually, Dot would feel guilty and stay but not today!! She was gonna go and get her man!! (Lol) Dot picked up her coat and went through the launderette door so fast; it looked like she was running! Pauline was frozen to the spot, she was speechless!! This wasn’t like Dot at all!!!
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When Dot had got home, she changed her clothes and rushed over to Sophisti-Kate's.
Chrissie: Slow down, Dot!
Dot: I need a haircut and a manicure and it has to be finished before 5:30.
Chrissie and Kate were speechless, but Kate somehow managed to fine some words…<br> Kate: Right…err…Lets get to work!!!
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 13:18:40 GMT -5
Mmmmm Alfie's pants.... More when ya ready x
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 13:21:31 GMT -5
Is it ok if i post some more later? I have to write some more.
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Post by Sarah on Feb 27, 2005 13:39:11 GMT -5
Is it ok if i post some more later? I have to write some more. x Yeah course, when you're ready!
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Post by Katie on Feb 27, 2005 13:40:30 GMT -5
Thanks xxx
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