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Post by Emz on Nov 27, 2005 12:57:08 GMT -5
Great please write some more soon
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Nov 28, 2005 1:35:05 GMT -5
Thsanks. I wish some of the other members would reply too. Ok here comes some more.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Nov 28, 2005 2:17:29 GMT -5
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
In the Vic
Vicki: "Another bottle of wine please". Frank: "Do you think you should?" Vicki: "Do as I tell you". Frank: "Sharonand Dennis won't like it". Vicki: "oesn't matter". Frank: "Very well, suit yourself".
Kate comes in.
Frank: "Morning gogeous. What cn I get you?" Kate: "Orange juice please" Frank: "Here you are, on the house". Kate: "Thanks".
Cut to Slaters.
Bellinda finds a necklace and thinking that Neville has bought it for her buys Neville a watch. Nevlle, seeing the watch buys her a bunch of red roses.
Bellinda: "So the neklace is not for me then?" Neville: "No" Bellinda: "Who then?" Nevile: "Its for Johny Allen to give to his daughter". Bellinda: "Oh, I'm so sorry, I thought it was for another woman". Neville: "Of course ot my sweet".
Cut to Club.
Neville: "If anyone asks say I gve you the necklace to give to Ruby." Johnny: "Oh very well". Amy: "Thanks darling its lovely".
Vicki stumbles into he club, swinging empty bottles.
Vicki: "Anotherr drink please". Johnny: "You've had enough Vicki now go".
Vicki sulkily leaves and sits on Arthur's bench. Johny ourt for a walk, joins her there after some time.
Johnny: "You musnt drink so much." Vicki: "Why not?" Johnny: "I kno what happens when people bcome alcoholics. Rubys mum, my wife, she was an alcoholicfor a short time before I helped her to overcome it. It wasn't easy but at least it didn't destroy her life".
Vicki breaks downand Johnny calms her down.
Johnny: "Go and tell Sharon and Dennis you give in and will control your drinking. Vicki: "Yes, I will. Thanks Johnny." Closing Music
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Nov 28, 2005 13:12:31 GMT -5
Tuesday 7.30 Opening Music
At the Slaters.
Charlie: "Zoe" Zoe: "Yes dad" Charlie: "Seen Lynne around anwhere at all?" Zoe: "No, why?" Charlie: "I haven't seen her since yesterday. She's disappeared." Lynne: "Well I sasw her go to Garry's flat so she's probably still there." Charlie: Oh yes of course. never thought of that, I'll go round and ask."
Cut to Scarlett.
Johnny Allen plays the CCTV footage of Neville and Amy's ongoing affair, smiles, slips out the casette and puts it away.
Cut to Garry's flat
Garry: "No she's not here Charlie. After we spent some time together I asked if she wanted me to see her off at your house but she said no and went alone."
Charlie: "Strange. She neverr turned up."
Garry (struck by a sudden thought) Charlie, there's something perhaps I should tell you, come in, have a cup of tea".
Cut to Kate's house.
Doobell rings and Kate opens it.
Frank: "Sorry to distub but I think you may have accidentally picked up my mobile."
Kate: "And if I have?"
Frank: Can I have it back then?"
Kate: "Here it is"
Frank: "Yes well ts cold out here".
Kate: "Well as long as you're here, come in".
Frank: "A lady's coat should always be taken off".
Frank unbuttons Kate's coat.
Kate: "And so should a man's.
Kate unbutton's Frank's coat.
Frank: "Well, what can I do for you?"
Kate: "What do you think?"
Frank seduces Kate.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Nov 30, 2005 16:54:03 GMT -5
Thursday 7.30 Opening Music
In Garry's flat
Charlie: "My girl was being stalked?" Garry: "Yes" Charlie: "I'll kill that George. Why do people always mess about with my girls?" Garry: "Well what can I say?" Charlie: "I'm glad you told me. Can I borrow your phone a second?" Garry: "Of course. What are you going to do?" Charlie: "Report Lynne as a missing person".
Cut to Scarlett.
Johnny: "Don't often see you here". Bellinda: "No, I usually go to the pub". Johnny: "Yeah, get er a drink will you Amy?" Amy: "Ok Mr Allan". Johnny: "You husband around?" Bellida: "No he's at the Arches". Johnny: "Right".
Cut to Kate's house.
Kate wakes up in bed with Frank.
Kate: "We shouldn't have done this". Frank: "Oh come on, why not?" Kate: "I know othing aout you". Frank: "Nor I about you". Kate: Its not that I don't fancy ya". Frank: "I think you look attractyive". Kate: "Oh stop that". Frank: "You do." Kate: "You know who you remind me of?" Frank: "No, who?" Kate: "My ex Den Watts, I was seeing him when he was married. You talk like him, you're ver - persuasive". Frank: "I'll stop your mouth.
He kisses her.
Cut to Slaters.
Charlie: "I'll answer the door. Opens it. DCI Marsden: "You reported a missing person". harlie: "Yes, my daughter Lynne, please come in ad I'll explain what I know".
Closing music
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 1, 2005 1:49:27 GMT -5
Friday 8.00 Opening Music
In Johnny's House
Johnny: "Morning Swetheart". Tina: "Morningdarling, you're up early." Johnny yawning): "I've go to sort through all these CCTV tapes. Big deal." Tina: You go and grab yourself a cffee and relax. I'll sort through them for a wwhile". Johnny: "Are you sure?" Tina: "Yes loe, what time were up up?" Johnny: "3.00, its complete hel, I haven't even looked at some of them". Tina: "I'll do some." Johnny: "Thanks. Can I sleep darling, I'm dropping off and can I stay with you?" Tina: "f course y love".
Johnny puts his head in Tina's lap nd dops off, Tina sorts through the tapes.
Cut to Slaters
Charlie: "I hope that they'll find her." B Mo: "I hope so too. You'd better get som sleep Charlie, you've been up all night". Charlie: "Yeah you're right, I'll sleep a bit more". B Mo: "No point making yourself sick, that wouldn't help Lynne at all". Charlie: "Quie right, quite right".
Cut to Vic
Gus: "You're in here a lot now Martin". Martin: "Yeah, when I'm not on the stall I'm here, or at Scarlett or inthe allotments." Gus: 2And Sonia?" Martin: "She's either at college or at Naomi's or taking care of Rebecca". Gus: "How old is Rebecca now?" Martin: "Three" Gus: "Women are more complicated than men". Martin: "You can say that again".
Cut to Johnny's house.
Tina reaches a particlar video and plays it. The CCTV shows Amy working in the bar at Scarlett. Neville comes in.
Amy: "Is the coast clear?" Neville: "Yeah"
They move in to each other and kiss passionately.
Tina stops the tape and glances down at Johnny who is still asleep with his head in her lap. She ejects the cassette, leans forward and replaces it in the box and pockets it before sorting through the others.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 1, 2005 13:28:00 GMT -5
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
In the caff
Tina: "What do you think I should do Ruby?" Ruby: "I don't know, did you show it to dad?" Tina: "No, he was asleep." Ruby: "Do you think he knows?" Tina: "No, I don't think so, even if he did what should it matter?" Ruby: "So what are you going to do about it?" Tina: "I don't know. Its not really my place". Ruby: ""Maybe you should put it back in the club, anyway Imust be oing, bye". Tina: "Bye".
Ruby goes. Ian comes for the bill. Tina pays it and goes but being absent minded forgets the tape.
Cut to Naomi's house.
Sonia: "Men eh?" Naomi: "Yeah"Sonia "Its only been a little while since we got custody of Rebecca and all my time's taken up with her and Martin doesn't like that." Naomi: "Maybe if you just talked to him". Sonuia: "Tried that. We've had our ups and downs but I think the split is comming soon." Naomi: "Don't say that". Sonia: "It's true." Naomi: "You know I had the same prolem with my ex boyfriend?" Sonia: "Yes?" Naomi: "Well we had a baby right? We were together maybe six months and then I gave birth". Sonia: "And?" Naomi: "Well I spent all my time with the baby and he felt left out. Then my ex girlfriend Susie with whom I was good mates...." Sonia: "Ex girlfriend?" Naomi: "Yeah, didn't I tell you I'm bi?" Sonia: "No" Naomi: "Well, anyway I had a long talk with her and he said I made he same mistake as most mums do, forgetting my boyfriend in my love fr my baby". Sonia: "What happened then?" Naomi: "Well susie encouraged me not to shut Tim out, to share my problems with hm, talk to him and give him a chance with the baby, not let Tim be a stranger to my son." Sonia: "Did you?" Naomi: "Yeah and it really paid off I can tell you". Sonia: "Thanks Naomi, you're right, I'll ask Martin to sit with Rebecca while I'm at college tomorrow." Naomi: "Yeah, I love looking after her too but you ashould give Martin a chane". Sonia: "Yeah I know".
Cut to Slaters.
DCI Marsen: "Well Mr Slater, he news is badI'm afraid". Charlie: "what do you mean?" DCI Marsden: "Well we found out froma jogger that there was a struggle at the edge of thebrige. Georgepushed Lynne in saying she betrayed him, maybe he thought she was getting back together with her husband but he slipped and fell in too and both were drowned. I'm really sory. You haveto come with me and identify the bodies".
Closing Music
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 2, 2005 2:56:38 GMT -5
Tuesday 7.30 Opening Music
At the Fowlers.
Sonia: "Martin". Martin: "Yeah" Sonia: "I'm sorry, maybe I was a bit unfair. You are Rebecca's dad and I love you and so I want you to babysit her while I'm at colege.! Martin: "Thanks Son, what's brought this on?" Sonia: "I had a long talk with Naomi and sh told me that she and her ex boyfriend nearly split up over their son because she spent more time with the baby than with him but then a mate advised her to let her boyfriend play apart in their son's life so everyhing was all right." Martin: "I'm lad. Come here".
They kiss.
Cut to caff.
Dan: "Tea please". Ian: "Here you go". Dan "Cheers mate, what's that?" Ian: "Its a tape, somone left it here in the caff tyesterday and I can't remember who." Dan: "Tell you what, I'll get everyone round the pub and play it and then whoever recognises the movie or whatever it is will come forward and claim it. Bettter than wandering around trying to find out whose tape it is and accidentally giving it to the wrong person." Ian: "Cheers mate. You take it then". Dan: "Thanks Ian."
Cut to Walford Police Station
Charlie (feeling sick): "Its my girl all right and theother is the bloke we had round to dinner." Kate: "I know this is distressing for you Mr Slater but any clue you can give would be helpful." Charlie: Here goes..."
Closing Music
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 3, 2005 3:38:09 GMT -5
Thursday 7.30 Opening Music
In the Vic. The Slater sisters are there with B Mo, Sharon, Dennis, Martin, Sonia, Naomi, Garry and Pauline.
Dan: "Well I suppose we couldn't have everyone in here. Anyway Ian found a tape left behind in he caff and I offered to play it here so if anyone recognises it as their tape they can get it back. Its very hectic having to go roumd asking everyone until someone claims it."
Garry: "Don't blame you mate."
Dan "Well here goes - looks as though its rewound."
Cut to Naomi's flat.
Sonia: "Well Martin and I have made it up." Naomi: "I'm glad". Sonia: "Shall we have a drink and celebrate it?" Naomi: "I'll be glad to".
cut to Charlie's shed. Charlie: "What shall I do Alfie?" Alfie:"You must tell them the truth. I know its orrible but you have to face p to it". Charlie: "I wish lynne had told me he was a stalker". Alfie: "Maybe she idn't wnt to orry you." Charlie: "You'rre rght. I have to tell them".
Cut to Vic. Neville walks in.
Neville: "That bloody car took me hours to - what?"
Bellinda slaps him and empties her glass of wine ver his head.
Neville: "What the - "
Bellinda: "Look at the television screen".
Neville looks. "Uh oh".
Bellinda: "You sad sad loser".
She walks out.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 3, 2005 14:06:51 GMT -5
Friday 8.00 Opening Music
At the Slaters.
Neville: "Let me explain". Bellinda: "No" Neville: "But I..." Bellinda: "I don't want to hear it". Neville: "I..." Bellinda: "No Neville. Youve blown it. I'm leaving you". Nevile: "What?" Bellida: "You heard".
Cut to B and B
Anthony: "Zoe" Zoe: "Yes darling" Anthony: "I think you should go to the gym and excersise a bit, you know special excersises for women who are pregant". Zoe: "Yes, I think so too." Anthony: "I love you". Zoe: "I love you too".
Cut to Slaters.
Neville: "Belle don't do this". Bellinda: "I'm sorry Neville.
She takes her bags downstairs.
Neville: "I love you". Bellinda: "If you loved me you wouldn't have lied to me or cheated on me."
Bellinda kisses her husband goodbye and walks away.
Cut to Naomi's flat where Naomi and Sonia are both drunk.
Sonia: "I propose a toast to husbands". Naomi: "I drink to that". Sonia: "So whats happening with you and Garry?" Naomi: "Nothin - he fances me ut I don't encourage him, he's just a mate". Sonia: "I'd btter go home now - you're a good mate Naomi."
Sonia hugs Naomi and then the wine going to her head stands up drunkenly and walks out of the flat with Naomi linlking arms beside her, just as drunk.
Cut to Garry's Flat.
Garry: "Bellinda". Bellinda: "Oh Garry. She breaks dwn sobbing on his shoulder". Garry: "Its all right, you can stay here as long as you want".
Cut to Market.
Martin feeling worried leaves the Fowler house in search of Snia. He sees Sonia and Naomi by his stall engaged in a drunken and passionate kiss.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 4, 2005 4:41:34 GMT -5
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
At the Fowlers.
onia: "Martin, what's up with you? You didn't talk to me at all last night."
Martin ignores her.
Sonia: "What have I done?" Martin: "I saw you last night. You were snogging Naomi." Sonia: "Martin, I can explain, I" Martin: "I don't wsnt to hear about it". Sonia: "Martin, its not that I..." Martin: "I thought you were straight". Sonia: "I thought I was too but I'm not so sure now". Martin: "reat, thats just great. I'll hang around waiting while you sort out your sexuality shall I? Where are you going?" Sonia: Out, to clear my head".
Cut to B and B
Neville: Thanks for letting me stay here last night". Patrick: "Thats ok." Yolande: "You really shouldn't have dne it though". Neville: "I know"
Cut to Fowlers.
Martin: "Well." Sonia: "Martin, I've decided to ove out" Martin: "What?" Sonia: "It's no use Martin, our marriage has been on the rocks for months." Martin: "But where will you go?" Sonia: "Naomi's flat" Martin: "Are you not straight?" Sonia: "I thought I was but now I'm not sure, I miht e bi". Martin: "Oh" Sonia: "You do understand don't you?" Martin: "Yes, yes of course I do. I sppose all I want is for you to be happy and if Naomi can make you so then I'm glad." Sonia: "I don't know, I never thought of itbut maybe, its worth a try. Goodbye Martin."
Martin hugs Sonia.
Martin: "Goodbye."
Cut to Kate's house.
Kate: "Frank, where are you living at the moment?" Frank: "Bedsit" Kate: "I know it seems like I',m rushing into this but how would you like to move in with me?" Frank: "Do you mean it?" Kate: "Yes" Frank: I'd love to gorgeous, thanks".
They kiss.
Cut to Fowlers.
Pauline: "Martin, there is something I have een thinking over which I wnt to discuss with you". Martin: "Yes" Pauline: "Wel, the thing is, Joe's invited me to stay with him inm his house, move in with im like". Martin: "Where?" Pauline: "Well he lives in California" Martin: "What? Did you accept?" Pauline: "Yes, but he also suggested that if you and Sonia wanted you could come as well". Martin: "Sonia can't". Pauline: "Why?"
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 5, 2005 1:25:36 GMT -5
Tuesday 7.30 Opening Music
In Garry's flat. Garry comes into the sitting room with tea.
Bellinda "Thanks for putting me up last night Garry" Garry (distractedly) : "That's fine. I'm still rather numb you know over Lynne's death". Bellinda: "I am as well." Garry: "When is the inquest?" Bellinda: "Next week and the funeral's fixed for the week after",
cut to Fowlers.
Pauline: So Sonia's like "that" is she?" Martin: "Don't say it in that way. There's nothing wrong with being gay or bi". Pauline: "I thought she was straight". Martin: "I thought she was too and so did she but now she thinks she's bi". Pauline: "Maybe you should come with me and Joe ten. It'd be a change of air for you." Martin: "Yes, I think so too, but the stall?" Pauline: "We'll find someone tomind it." Martin: "I thought that you said you're moving in with Joe, tyhat it was't a holiday?" Paiuline: "That's right". Martin: "You'd like me to come too?" Pauline: "If you want to". Martin: "Yes, good idea. I accept".
cut to Naomi's flat.
Naomi: "It can sometimes happen Sonia, sometimes people in straight marriages can discover that they are actually gay or bi". Soni: "I know that once happened with Pauline's friend Derek. He was married to Cynthia and he had an affair with Robert. Don't tell anyone will you?" Naomi: "I promise I won't".
Pause.
Naomi: "So what happens now. Do you just want to be mates or what?"
Sonia moves in for a kiss and Naomi does the same.
Sonia: "This feels so strange". Naomi: "You were my first gay kiss you know". Sonia: "Oh".
They kiss and kiss and kiss. The ell rings and Sonia answers.
Sonia: "Martin." Martin: "I just thought you should know that mum and myself have decidedto sell up and move to California with Joe". Sonia: "Right" Martin: "I'll let you kow when its all fixed. Mum's only just put the houe on the market, then I'll bringRebecca over to you. um's with her at the moment." Sonia: "I see, well thanks." Martin: "We're still mates?" Sonia: "Yes, of course".
Cut to Caff
Juley: "Hi Rubes" Ruby: "Hi Jules"
They kiss.
Juley: "Do you want to have a coffee?" Ruby: "Yeah, thanks." Juley: "Let's find a table." Ruby: "Yeah alright".
Cut to square. A cab draws up. Out step Ricky, Liam, Bianca and Diane Butcher. Giving theit money to the driver they walk up to he pub and stand there looking at it in the dark.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 5, 2005 14:32:25 GMT -5
Thursday 7.30 Opening Music
In the pub.
Ricky and Bianca come in with Liam. Diane follows a short distance behind.
Sonia: "Oh Brianca"
They hug.
Sonia: So you're back". Bianca: Yes, and - " Sonia: "And what sis?"
Binca moves to the middle of the pub and takes Ricky's hand.
Bianca: "Ricky and I, we're back together" All: "Oh that is good news".
Frank hugs his dughter and daughter in law and pats Ricky onthe back.
Frank: "Back from France then Diane?" Diane: "Yeah" Frank: "I'm staying with a Mrs Kate Mitchll now." Ricky: "She yor girlfriend?" Frank:: "Yeah".
Kate comes in.
Frank: "Kate, this is my son Ricky, my daughter Diane, my daughter in law Bianca and my grandson Liam." Kate (shaking hands): "How do you do, pleased to meet you". Bianca: "Likewise". Diane: "We'd etter find places at the B and B." Ricky: "Yeah" Kate: "You, Bianca and Liam can stay with us if you like". Bianca: Are you sure?" Kate: "Yeah" Bianca (hugs her) : "Thanks Kate".
Diane has an orange juice and thengoes to the B and B. On the way she meets Dawn Miller.
Dawn: Hi Diane: Hi Diane: Who are you? Dawn: "Dawn Miller. What's your name? Diane: "Diane Butcher. Dawn: Off anywhere exciting? Diane: I'm going to rent a room at the B and B. Dawn: I'll come withyou. I don't need a room but I might look in and say Hi to Yolande and Patrik. Diane: Who are they? Dawn: The owners. Diae: Oh right.
They walk to the B and B and Diane rents a room. Dawn leaves after a bit telling Diane she'll see her around. Then Dane spots Neville drinking inthe corner.
Diane: "Who's that?" Patrick: Neville Peacock. His wife found out he was having an affair yesterday and so he split up with her and came here. Closing Music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 7, 2005 14:18:39 GMT -5
Friday 8.00 Opening Music
In the B and B.
Diane: "Hi there" Neville: "Hi" Diane: "I'm Diane Butcher". Neville: "Nevile Peacock" Diane: "hat are you doing?" Neville: "Drinking" Diane: "Why?" Neville: "My wife left me after seeing me having an affair on a tape". Diane: "Oh, right - I you ever need to talk, here's my card and you can see/ring me any time". Neville: "Thanks".
Cut to Fowler's.
Pauline: "We have a buyer interwested in the house". Martin: "Great. Who?" Pauline: "Rosa di Marco." Martin: "Oh, riht - Rosa moving back into the square then?" Pauline: "Yeah, Gianni, Teresa, Nicki are all comming too. Beppe is not though." Martin: "And have you accepted the offer?" Pauline: "Yes, they're comming on Thursday. By the wy I've booked us tickets for next Friday, you know for California." Martin: "Cool" Pauline: "Hasve you thought about someone to look after Rebecca?" Martin: "Sonia says she'll do it". Pauline (raises eyebrows: "Oh - can we trust "that" kind of person to look after a sensitove girl?" Martin: "Shut up mum, we're not living in the Middle Ages".
Cut to Johnny's office.
Dan comes in.
Johnny: "Yes?" Dan: " A fellow I borrowed money from is demanding payment". Johnny: "How much?" Dan: "Five grand". Johnny: "And you think I'm going to help you repay it?" Dan: "Yes" Johnny: "Let me see - you blackmail me, you inform on me, what makes you think that I'll give in to such pressure?" Dan: "This".
He pulls out a gun.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 9, 2005 13:55:05 GMT -5
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
At the Slaters.
B Mo: "Charlie, talk to me".
Charlie ignores her.
B Mo: "I know it's difficult but we must all remain strong. Don't shiut me out Charlie".
Charlie ignores her.
B Mo: "Tomorrow's the day of the inqyuest and the funeral's next Monday. Then we can put it behind us".
Charlie continues to blank her nd B Mo leaves the room in fustration.
Cut to Johnny's house.
Tina: "What is it darling? You've been very distracted since last night". Johnny: "Nothing sweetheart. I#ll make you some coffee". Tina: "Thanks love, you do know you can tell me anything don't you?" Johnny: "Yes, I know. I love you".
Cut to Arches.
Garry: "You'll wear that car out at the rate you're washing it". Neville "I know". Garry: "Look, its your own fault you cheated on Bellinda". Neville (sourly): "Still at your place is she?" Garry: "Yeah but she doesn't want to see you".
Pause.
Garry: "Don't tajke it out on the car." Neville: "Why not. Cars are impartial which is more than you can say for humans." Garry: "Look just apologise to elinda and beg her to take you back". Neville: "What do you think I am? A jellyfish?"
Cut to square. Johnny is inthe club and Tna is heading towards the allotments. She pauses.
In the allotments Ruby and Juley are kissing and Tina sees.
Closing Music.
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