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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 15, 2005 2:51:46 GMT -5
Background.
Jane has reast cancer which has spread and she is only likely to live for six months. Dan andFrank on the Vic and Alfie works behind the bar. Bellinda has left Neville because of his affair with Amy and is now living in Garry's flat. Neville is at the B and B. Zoe and Anthony are engaged to be married. Lynne is now deceased as she and her stalker George both fell off the bridge at the park. Unfortunately there was no evidence so the verdict was given as accidental death, much o Charlie's anger. Ricky, ianca and Liam have oved bck to the square and thy are living with Frank and te who at the moment are an item. Tina has discovered Juley and Ruby's relationship and Johnny is being blackmailed into giving Dan money to pay off a large debt. Dan has taped Johnny's confession that he pushed Andy off the highway. Diane Butcher is buisily lirting with Neville. Lisa and Sharon own the nail bar, Dennis the bookies, and Lisa's boyfriend Maxwell Owen owns the car lot. Rebecca is reunited with Martin and Sonia. Sonia has left Martin and moved inwith Naomi. Joe has invited Pauline and Martinto stay with himin California. The Fowlers house has been put on market. Sonia and Naomi are looking after Rebecca at the moment.
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I will post the script as soon as I have time.
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cielbr
The Brannings
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Post by cielbr on Dec 16, 2005 6:08:08 GMT -5
it is looking good. can't wait to read more soon!
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 28, 2005 1:34:36 GMT -5
Friday 8.00 Opening Music
In the B and B.
Anthony: "Darling, I've arranged our wedding". Zoe: "Where?" Anthony: "Walford Church, Christmass Day". Zoe: "Oh that is wonderful".
They kiss.
Anthony: "'ve got to go to the surgery now". Zoe: "Oh, must you?" Anthony: "Yeah, I'll be back soon, you understand don't you?" Zoe: "Yes, yes of course".
Cut to flat above Vic.
Sharon: "Look darling, the first scan has come". Dennis (jokingly): "Looks like a pile of sheeps wool". Sharon(equally jokingly): "Hey, that's our baby youre talking about". Dennis: "Yeah, I know". Sharon: "I was thinkling sweetheart, shall we have a party in the pub,with Frank and Dan's onsent of course?" Dennis: "do you want to tell everyone?" Sharon: "No but I want to celebrate in one form or another". Dennis: "I'll ask them".
Cut to Johnny's.
Johnny: "What?" Tina: "Don't get agitated". Johnny: "My daughter's seeing that son of a b..." Tina: "Johnny please, I wish I hadn't told you now, I just don't want marital secrets". Johnny: "So you were planning on keeping it secret, this gets better and better." Tina: "Johnny, whycan't you just be hapy for Ruby?" Johnny: "I'm her dad, its my job to look out for her". Tina: "But you're possessive ad overprortective and jealous." Johnny: "I'm not". Tina: "You are".
He lunges at her.
Tina: "Don't you dare hit me."
Doorbell rings and Johnny answers, holding Tina behind him.
DCI Marsden: "Mr Allen I am arresting you for the murder of andy unter on February 18th. You do not have to say anything but it may harm your defence if you refuse to answer when questioned on charges information you will later rely on in court".
Closing Music.
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jessi
The Millers
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Post by jessi on Dec 29, 2005 5:36:56 GMT -5
Write more
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Dec 29, 2005 15:58:43 GMT -5
Hi Jessi. I'm glad you like it. Here's some more comming up.
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
At the market.
Dawn: "Diane" Diane: "Hi Dawn" Dawn: "Where are you off to?" Diane: "Christmas shopping". Dawn: "imnd if I join you?" Diane: "No, be my guest".
Cut to Vic
Frank: "Yes, that's fine with me Sharon. I must have a word with Dan and Alfie but yes, why not?" Sharon: "Thanks"
Cut to Police Station
DCI Marsden plays the tape.
Marsden: "Can you explain this Mr Allen?" Johnny: "I see you've caught me out" Kate: "We sure have". Marsden: "Can you relieve the night of February 18th Mr Allen?" Johnny: "Very well".
Cut to Millers.
The twins are putting up tinsel while Keith as usual is infront of the television. Rosie is decorating the Christas tree with Dawn and Mickey's help. The doorbell rings.
Dawn: "I'll answer it."
She opens the door.
Mike: "Guess who?"
Dawn: "Dad"
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 4, 2006 1:44:53 GMT -5
Tuesday 7.30 Opening Music
At the Fowlers.
Pauline: "We have an offer". Martin: "What?" Pauline: "For the house" Martin: "Great, who?" Pauline: "Rosa di Marco".
cut to Police Station.
Tina: "Hi Johnny". Johnny: "Tina".
They embrace and kiss.
Johnny: "About the other day, I'm sorry". Tina: "I know". Johnny: "Forgive me?" Tina: "Yes I will".
Cut to Millers.
Mike: "I must say its nice to be here for Christmas". Dawn: Yeah." Mike (holds out hand to Keith): "Friends?" Keith (shakes hands): "Yes". Rosie: "It's Christmas Day next Monday".
Cut to Vic
Frank: "Dan and alfie agree so we have fixed it for New Year's Eve" Sharon: "Thanks".
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 5, 2006 15:10:24 GMT -5
Thursday 7.30 Opening Music
In the B and B
Martin: "Are you sure it's today mum?" Pauline: "Yes, I'm sure Martin." Martin: "How long are we going to be stuck here then?" Pauline: "We will go on New Year's Eve"
Cut to Walford Prison.
Sam: "So, got you too did they?" Johnny: "Yeah". Sam: "What did you do?" Johnny: "You might as well know, I am in here because I pushed Andy off the highway". Sam: "What?" Johnny: "Keep it down". Sam: "You murdered my husband?" Johnny: "Yes, I did". Sam: "But they thought it was an accident, there's no evidence, you can't have". UJohnny: "Well i did, Iconfessed and Dan Sulivan taped my confession".
Sam flies at him.
Johnny (holding her back): "Why so empotional? I thought you hated him". Sam: "Yes but that's no call for making me a widdow." Policeman: "Alright then calm down you two".
Cut to Square. A van is seen outside the Fowlers. Gianni and Beppe are busily unloading furniture. Rosa is in the house arranging things with Teresa. Nicky has wandered off.
Cut to the market.
Ruby: "Hi" Nicki: "Hi" Ruby: "What's your name?" Nicki: "Nicki i Marco, yours?" Ruby: "Ruby Allen".
Pause
Ruby: "You look ereally down Nicky". Nicki: "I am" Ruby: "ome into the caff. Have a cuppa?" Nicki: "Thanks".
Closing music.
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cielbr
The Brannings
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Post by cielbr on Jan 6, 2006 7:09:53 GMT -5
i really like this. its good.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 6, 2006 13:03:47 GMT -5
Thanks. I like your script too.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 7, 2006 5:14:37 GMT -5
Christmas Eve Opening Music
In the Caff
Ruby: "So do you want to talk about it?" Nicki: "Yes".
Pause
Nicki: "I've been diagnosed with clinical depression." Ruby: "Oh Nicki". Nicki: "Yes". Ruby: "I'm really sorry". Nicki: "Yeah" Ruby: "Have you told anyone? Your family I mean?" Nicki: "No" Ruby: "But well don't you think you should?" Nicki: They won't believe me. Tney'll just give me useless advice such as eating and sleeping well and geting excersise. As if thats anybloody use". Ruby: "I see what you mean".
cut to Vic.
Rosa:"Hi, anyone about?"
Pause
Rosa: "Isuppose. I'll go and look".
She and Gianni go around the bar and down to the cellar where they walk in on Little Mo nd Alfie kissing.
Gianni: "Oh sorry, don't let us interupt you". Little Mo (mbarased): "Ah." Alfie: "I'm Alfie Moon bar manager, I'll be there at once. I forgot you see, I thought Dan or Frank were there". Little Mo: "Dan's gone to the police station to visit Johnny Allen, he told me. Frank nd Kate? Well I guess they are - erm." Alfie: "Oh, I see, well we don't want to disturb them if they are erm, well what can I get you?"
cut to Prison.
Johnny: "You've got some nerve". Dan: "Just came to see how you're settling in." Johnny: "I'm fine. Now will you get lost?" Dan: "No, and you can't force me either". Johnny: "Great, really great."
In the club.
Garry: "Oh Tina has put mistletoe up". Bellinda: "Yeah"
Pause.
Bellinda: "Well Garry". Garry: "Well Belle".
Pause.
Bellinda moves closer to Garry under the mistletoe. Garry moves closer to her.
Garry: "I love you". Bellibda: "I love you too".
They kiss.
Closing music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 8, 2006 14:41:26 GMT -5
Christmas Day 8.00 till 9.00 Opening Music. Part 1
At the Mllers.
Mike: "Merry Christmas everyone". Dawn: "Merry christmas dad". Rosie and Keith: "Merry Christmas Mike". Mike: "Here Keith thought you'd like this" (hands him a bottle of wine) "and here" (he gives Mickey, Dawn, the twins and Rosie presents). Keith: "Cheers mate".
Cut to Vic
Zoe: "I am oing the right thing aren't I?" L Mo: "about what?" Zoe: "Marrying Anthony". L Mo: "Yes of course. You love him don't you?" Zoe: "Yes" L Mo: "So what's the problem?" Zoe: "I don't know.Just pre wedding jitters I suppose". Alfie: "You have nothing to worry about Zoe, believe me." Zoe: "Supposing it doesn't work out?" Alfie: "Trust me, it will. Hug?"
Zoe hugs Alfie.
Zoe: "Thanks D - Alfie". Alfie:"No problem".
Cut to B and B
Patrick: "Why are you so nervous?" Anthony: "Pre wedding jitters I syuppose and remembeing how it was last time." Patrick: "Last time was different. Now Zoe is older and you yourself are more stable". Anthony: "True, but I wish I could call her". Yolande: "Absolutelynot, it's very bad luck for the bride to see or speak to the groombefore the ceremony".
Cut to Slaters. Charlie helps Zoe in who is looking beautiful inher white dress adorned with pink roses, with flowers in her hair too. Bellinda and Little Mo the bridesmaids lamber in too.
Charlie: "Excited love?" Zoe: "Yeah and nervous too". Charlie: "Don't worry, it'll be fine."
Garry and Belinda exchange significant looks before the cab pulls away.
Cut to church
Vicar: "Dearly beloved, we are gathered here inthe sign of God to join this man and this woman in holy matrimony. If anyone knows of any lawful impediment why they shoulfd notbe conjoined now is the moment to utter it".
Nobody speaks.
Vicar: "Do you nthon Trueman take this woman for your lawfully wedded wife?"
Anthony: "I do".
Vicar: "Do you Zoe take this manto be your lawfully wedded husband?"
Zoe: "I do".
Vicar: "Will you be a true and faithful husband, care for her in sickness and in health, prosperity and adversity and foresaking all others keep yourself only for her as long as you live?"
Anthony: "I will"
Vicar: "Will you be a true and faithful wif, care for himin sickness and in health, prosperity and adversity and foresaking all others keep yourself only for him as long as you live?"
Zoe: "I will"
Vicar: "You may exchange rings". They do so.
Vicar: "I now declare youare now man and wife. You may kiss the bride."
They kiss tenderly then -
Zoe: Oh" (she collapses to her knees in the middle of the kiss.
Charlie: "What is it love?"
Zoe (in a low voice to Antthony) "It's happening".
Anthony: Call an ambulance".
Closing Music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 9, 2006 3:05:25 GMT -5
Christmas Day Part 2 Opening Music.
In the Church.
Paramedics: "I'm Nicki and this is Woody. What's happenng?" Anthony (in an undertone): "She's in labour". Nicki: "Well we must get her into an ambulance"
They lift Zoe and carry her away. Anthony follows.
Charlie: "What have you done to my girl?" Anthony: "Nothing". Charlie: "What's wrong with her then?" Anthony: "She's pregnant. She's giving burth right here and now". Charlie: "Is it yours?" Anthony: "No. We;ve only been going out a few months and haven't even septtogether". Charlie: "That's all right then, I'm sorry". Anthony: "No problem". Charlie: "here are you taking her?" Woody: "Holby City". Charlie: "I'll be right there, in my cab". Anthony: "I'll go with her now".
cut to Vic.
Sharon: "What is it Dennis? Where are Zoe and Anthony?" Dennis: "Zoe went into labour just as she was kissing the goom". Sharon: "Oh" Ian: "What are we to do with all this food?" Dennis: "Anthony said to start eating anyway. Zoe may not be able to come but nthony will be here as soon as he can". Kate: "No wedding ever goes without a hitch here".
cut to Holby
Tess: "Congratulations, you have a baby girl". Charlie (shaking Anthony's hand): "Congratlations Sir". Tess: "We will feedher for now so that the mother can take some rest, we'll leave the parents lone for a bit."
They go out.
Anthony: "Zoe" Zoe: "Yes darling". Anthony: "Are yougoing to tell them, your family I mean that the baby is Den's?" Zoe: "Yes, I know Imust. Anthony, do you mind at all?" Anthony: "That she's not mine you mean? No I don't". Zoe: "Are you sure?" Anthony: "Yes darling, I am sure, I would rear and bring her up as my own daughter". Zoe: "Thanks. I love you." Anthony: "I love you too."
cut to Vic
Little Mo: "Zoe told me to throw her bouquet for her. Ready, steady go."
Bellinda catches it and looks meaningfully at Garry.
Cut tohospital.
Charlie: "Do you want to tell us, whose it is?" Zoe: "It's Den's". Charlie: "What? But I thought you said you aborted it". Zoe: "At the last second I changed mymind but I pretended I had in order to stop Chrissie glowering at me." Charlie: "Someone's got to tell haron and Dennis, I mean it is their sister or sister inlaw. " Zoe: "Yes, you tell them dad, you're not angry with me?" Charlie: "Of course not love". Zoe: "I'mgoing to sleep now, I'm tired." Charlie: Bye love".
Closing Music
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 10, 2006 1:59:50 GMT -5
Boxing Day 7.30 Opeing Music
In the Vic
Frank: "How's Zoe?" Anthony: "She's fine, just tired." Alfie: "Here, Give her this (holds out a plate with a piece of weding cake). Little Mo: "I'll go. I'm going to visit her today anyway". Ian: "Tell hereveryone's thinking of her". L Mo: "Will do so". Charlie: "Sharon, Dennis, could I have a quick word er now?"
Cut to hospital.
L Mo: "Here you are Zoe." Zoe: "Thanks, I'll save it for later". L Mo: "Everyone sends their love". Zoe: "Thanks." L Mo: "Why didnt you tell us you were pregnant?" Zoe: "It's Den's" L Mo: "What?"
Cut to Flat above Vic
Sharon: "What?" Charlie: "Yes, I thought you should know". Dennis: "I'm just trying to get my head round this. That means that the baby in that hosptal is my sister." Sharon: "And my sister in law". Dennis: "And Vicki's sister". Charlie: "Yes" Dennis: "Thanks for telling us". Charlie: "No problem, just thought you ought to know".
Closing Music.
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Post by 98slbrookes98 on Jan 13, 2006 0:58:45 GMT -5
Monday 8.00 Opening Music
At the Millers.
Rosie: "Keith, I think you're being very unreasonablre" Keith: "Me, unreasonable? He's stayed for Christmas. That's long enough." Rosie: "But he has nowhere to go and no money." Pause Rosie: "And besides his mum is in hospital". Keith: "All right all right he can stay".
Cut to the Moon's flat.
Little Mo: "Alfie what is it?" Alfie: "Nothing drling, I can't sleep that's all". L Mo: "But you said that last night and the niht before". Alfie: "Yes". L Mo: "Maybe you shiould go to Dr Trueman if you are having sleepingdifficulties." Alfie: "Yes, Yes I suppose. Ok I'll go after my shift today".
Cut to Garry's flat.
Belinda: "We are doing thr right thing aren't we?" Garry: "What?" Bellibda: "You don't think it's too soon, after Lynne's funeral Imean?" Garry shifts guiltly: "Well we were divorced, finished". Bellinda: "I know". Garry: "You think it's too soon?" Bellinda: "Yes". Gary: "You still love me don't you? I love you". Belinda: I love you too but wellat the very least can we not tell anyone yet and hold onfor a bot?" Gary: "I agree with that".
They kiss.
ut to Anthony's surgery.
Anthony: "I will write you out a prescriotion for some sleeping pills." Alfie: "Thanks". Anthony: "And we'll fix up an appointment for four weeks time so that we can see how they are working". Alfie: "Thanks.
Closing Music.
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jessi
The Millers
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Post by jessi on Jan 14, 2006 7:46:18 GMT -5
I love it
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